emaan ViP User


Warning:    Number of posts: 1325 Age: 26 Location: Rawalpindi Reputation: 46 Points: 1590 Registration date: 2007-11-07
 | Subject: g .poetry Tue 27 May 2008, 5:44 pm | |
| apney ehsaas k sab rang uttar jany do,
meri umeed,mere khawb bikhar jany do.
apnay aangan may charagho ko jalao na abhi,
mere aangan may siyah raat uttar janey do...
bari mushkil se mila hy mujhe mere ghar ka pata,
raasto ab na uljho mujhe ghar janey do.
jin k anay ka bohat shor phaila tha hr soo,
unhi lamho ko chup chaap guzr jany do...
meri barbaadi ka alzaam na aye tum per,
mere halaat ko kuch aur bigar janey do. |
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hassan Teen Member


Warning:    Number of posts: 1103 Age: 29 Location: UAE al ain Reputation: 1 Points: -81 Registration date: 2008-03-04
 | Subject: Re: g .poetry Tue 27 May 2008, 5:54 pm | |
| WAH KAMAL KARDEYA,BOHOT KHOOB,VERYNICE |
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Angel Senior Moderator


Warning:    Number of posts: 4148 Age: 27 Location: SAPNO KI DUNIYA MAIN Reputation: 25 Points: 632 Registration date: 2007-09-25
 | Subject: Re: g .poetry Fri 30 May 2008, 9:49 pm | |
| VERY NICE__________________________ MAKE YOUR SELF AS A BOOK IT'S EASY TO READ BUT DIFFICULT TO WRITE THIS THING CAN'T GAVE PAIN TO SOME ONE OR SOME-BODY |
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SAJID Moderator


Warning:    Number of posts: 6477 Age: 28 Location: Pakistan Reputation: 18 Points: 808 Registration date: 2008-09-29
 | Subject: Re: g .poetry Fri 31 Oct 2008, 7:23 pm | |
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