Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai)

Subject: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 03 Nov 2008, 10:55 am

Kiya Farq Perta Hai.(For Sweety)

Koi Kisi Se Juda Ho Jaye TU Log Kehtay Hain Keh Kiya Farq Perta Hai?Kiya Sach Me Kisi Apne Se Juda Hone Me Koi Farq Nahi Parta?

Mai Ake Aeise Insan Se Dur Howa Keh Jis Ki Har Khushi Meri Khushi Se Howa Kerti Thi,Tu Kiya Farq Perta Hai Keh Mai Aus Se Aur Woh Muje Se Dur Howa.Aeise Dost Se Dur Howa Joh Kisi Ko Bhi Apni Nazron Se Gira Sakta Tha Lakin Muje Apni Nazron Se Girne Nahi Diya,Tu Kiya Farq Perta Hai Keh Mai Aus Se Aur Woh Muje Se Dur Howa?

Aeisa Dost Joh Hansta Tha Muje Hasane K Liye,Aeisa Dost Jis Ne Khud Ko Badla Mere Liye,Aeisa Dost JIs Ne Kabhi Muje Se Kuch MAnga He Nahi Siwaye Mere Sath Kay,Aeisa Joh Muje Apni Adat Bana Chuka Tha.Tu Kiya Farq Perta Hai Keh Mai Aus Se Aur Woh Muje Se Dur Howa?

Aeisa Dost Jis Ki Har Khushi Mere Sath he Thi,Aeisa Dost Joh Khud Se Zeyada Muje Per Itebar Kerta Tha,Aeisa Dost Joh Muje Kabhi Udas Hone Nahi Daita Tha,Aeisa Dost Jis Ne Har Khushi Aur Gham KAy Moqa Per Mera Sath Diya,Aeisa Dost Jis Ne Kabhi Muje Kisi Ki Nazron Se Girne Nahi Diya.Tu Kiya Farq Perta Hai Keh Mai Aus Se Aur Woh Muje Se Dur Howa

Aeisa Dost Jis Ki Baton Me Chahat Aur Apnaiyat Nazar Ati Thi Dill Chata Tha Keh Woh Joh KAhay Maan Lon Aus Ko,Aeisa Dost Jis Kay Dill Me Kisi kay Liye Koi Khalish,Koi Shikwa,Koi Gilla Na Tha Bas Pyar He Pyar Tha Aus Haseen Dill Me.Tu Kiya Farq Perta Hai Keh Mai Aus Se Aur Woh Muje Se Dur Howa?

Aeisa Dost Jis Ne Kabhi Muje Tanhai Ka Ehsas Tak Hone Nahi Diya,Aeisa Dost Joh Kabhi Muje Se Khafa Nahi Hota,Aeisa Dost JIs Kay Liye Meri Dosti Dunia Se Bhar Ker Thi,Aeisa Dost Joh Apni Baton Se Kisi Ka Bhi Dill Jeet Sakta Tha.Tu Kiya Farq Perta Hai Keh Mai Aus Se Aur Woh Muje Se Dur Howa?

Kiya Sach Me Kisi Kay Dur Hone Se Koi Farq Nahi Parta?Shayad Sach Kehti Hai Yai Dunia Keh Kisi Kay Juda Hone Se Kuch Farq Nahi Perta.

Zindagi Pehlay Bhi Chal Rahi Thi Zindagi Aub Bhi Chalti Jaye Gi,Saans Pehle Bhi Chalti Thi Saans Aub Bhi Chalti Jaye Gi,Khush Pehle Bhi Aus Kay Liye Tha Mai Khush Aub Bhi Aus KAy Liye Rehna Hai Muje,Dill Pehle Bhi Aus Ki Yaad Me Tarapta Tha Dill Aub Bhi Aus Ki Yaad Me Tarapta Hai,Yai Ankhein Pehlay Bhi Aus Ki Ek Jhalak Ko Tarasti Thein Aub Bhi Yai Ankhein Aus Ki Ek Jhalak Ko Tarasti Hain.Dard Yai Judai Ka Pehle Bhi Sehna Tha Dard Yai Judai Ka Aub Bhi Muje Sehna Hai.Mere Aks Me Pehle Bhi Woh Jhalakta Tha SAJID Mere Aks Me Aub Bhi Woh Jhalakta Hai.

Haqeeqat

Dunia K Kathan Raston Pe Tanha Mai Chalta Raha.
Sumaj Ker Imtehan Ek Zindagi Ka Mai Sehta Raha.

Ki Kiyaa Khata Aeisi Joh Milli Yai Saza Muje,
Sumjha Jisse Apna Wohi Muje Thukrata Raha.

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Kyun Auron Kay Khud Ko Tanah Mai Kerta Raha.

Ruktay Nahi Yai Ansoo Yaad Ker Kay Ause,
Shupa Ker Gham Ko Dill Me,Mai Muskarata Raha.

Na Jaan Saka Yai Dill Matlub Rasm-e-Ulfat Ka,
Maut Ko Sumaj Ker Zindagi Galay Mai Lagata Raha.

Kiya Ruswa Muje Kuch Ais Terhan Aus Ne Sajid,
Haqeeqat Kiya Hai Meri Dunia Ko Mai Batlata Raha.

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Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 03 Nov 2008, 12:31 pm

Dear Friends Ap Soch Rahay Hon Gay Keh Mai Ghazal Me Ake Line Compelete Nahi Ki.My Friends Mai Ne Kosish Ki Lakin Muje Se Koi Line Ban Nahi Rahi Joh Ais Kay Sath Match Ker Jaye.Kiya App Log Meri Help Kerein Gay May Be App Me Koi Ais Ko Compelete Ker Sakay.
Sweety Se tu Nahi howa.I think Irum Ker Sakti Hai Kyun K Woh Poetry Kerti Thi May Be Roshani Bhi Ker Sakay Aur Pathan Bhai Ki Help Lay Lon Ga Mai.
Ake Aur Khas Bat Mai Ne jitni Bhi YAi Wording Likhi Hai Ais Ko Likhne Me Sub Se Bara Hath My Great Friend Sweety Ka Hai.
Ais Poetry Ka main word (Kiya Farq Perta Hai ) Yai Sweety Ne He Diya Hai Muje Mere Mind Me Yai WorD Click Kia Aur Mai Ne Thora Bohat Likh Diya Hope U Like It.
(Ais Ko Thora Sumaj Ker Perhiye Ga Then U Feel It What I Am Saying?)

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 03 Nov 2008, 8:47 pm

home work incomplete hhai pora q nahi kiaaaaaaaa hmmm

kia ferq perta hai
line pori ho ya na ho
kia ferk perta hai

hahahahaaa

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 03 Nov 2008, 11:58 pm

han sahee kaha me h kiya farq parta hai zindagi me bhi tu kisi na kisi cheeze ki kami reh he jati hai yai line reh gai tu kiya
me h muje se nahi ban rahi thi ais liye yahin send ker di pata kisi se bane gi k nahi

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 10 Nov 2008, 12:06 am

ohhhhhhhh is k lie to time chahiye pir next time pe try karo gi ager ban sake

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Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 10 Nov 2008, 12:20 am

ok thks roshani tum ne keh diya itna bht hai mere liye bane ya na bane aub

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 10 Nov 2008, 9:15 pm

hmmm
zindagi main tu jine k rastay or bhi hain
Kyun Auron Kay liye Khud Ko Tanah Mai Kerta Raha scratch

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 10 Nov 2008, 11:26 pm

nice try irum thks a lot
but my dear srif aus incompelte line ko mat dekho puri ghazal ko zehan me rakh ker line banao ta keh woh line sub kay match kere.yai ake shair he lagta hai puri ghazal ais kay sath match nahi hoti
but once again thks

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Tue 11 Nov 2008, 7:22 pm

hmmm

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Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Wed 12 Nov 2008, 12:39 pm

acha jawab hai hmmm

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sat 15 Nov 2008, 9:27 pm

SAJID wrote:

nice try irum thks a lot
but my dear srif aus incompelte line ko mat dekho puri ghazal ko zehan me rakh ker line banao ta keh woh line sub kay match kere.yai ake shair he lagta hai puri ghazal ais kay sath match nahi hoti
but once again thks

ab yah chek kere

Dunia K Kathan Raston Pe Tanha Mai Chalta Raha.
Sumaj Ker Imtehan Ek Zindagi Ka Mai Sehta Raha.

Ki Kiyaa Khata Aeisi Joh Milli Yai Saza Muje,
Sumjha Jisse Apna Wohi Muje Thukrata Raha.

Kyun Auron Kay Khud Ko Tanah Mai Kerta Raha.
Shupa Ker Gham Ko Dill Me,Mai Muskarata Raha

Tarasti Hain Ankhein Aus Ke Ek dedaar Ko
Ruktay Nahi Yai Ansoo Yaad Ause Kerta reha

Na Jaan Saka Yai Dill Matlub Rasm-e-Ulfat Ka,
Maut Ko Sumaj Ker Zindagi Galay Mai Lagata Raha.

Kiya Ruswa Muje Kuch Ais Terhan Aus Ne Sajid,
Haqeeqat Kiya Hai Meri Dunia Ko Mai Batlata Raha.

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sat 15 Nov 2008, 10:11 pm

good achi poetry ker laiti hoo hain naaaa devoted member

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 4:43 pm

Kyun Auron Kay Khud Ko Tanah Mai Kerta Raha.
Shupa Ker Gham Ko Dill Me,Mai Muskarata Raha

Tarasti Hain Ankhein Aus Ke Ek dedaar Ko
Ruktay Nahi Yai Ansoo Yaad Ause Kerta reha

irum ain char lino ko apus me mix kaise ker diya tum ne.i think keh tum ne copy pates ghalat ker diya hai.yai lines khud me mix ho gai hain dekho zara tum phir batana ok

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 4:44 pm

me h tum bhi dekho yai lines mix ho gai hain.

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 7:07 pm

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 10:38 pm

nce kis liye hassan bhai

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 11:07 pm

yah line mix nahi hoi main ne hud ki hain apko theak lagi tu ok nahi tu koi baat nahi aap hud apni merzi se bena lo ok

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Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 11:09 pm

aray irum naraz ho ker reply kyun ker rahi ho tum.mai ne just pocha tha keh shayad tumn se ghalti se mixup tu nahi hon gi.simple itna pocha hai mai ne

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 11:18 pm

hmmm

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Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 11:21 pm

hmm ker k sari bat he khataum ker daiti ho tum

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 11:32 pm

ab kerne ko koi baat hi nahi hai mere pass tu kiya keroon

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Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Sun 16 Nov 2008, 11:41 pm

acha baba ghalati ho gai mafi millay gi kiya hahahahhah
zindagi me ake cheeze hai joh khatum nahi hoti woh hain batein aur tum keh rahi ho keh koi bat he nah hai kerne ko good

Last edited by sapna on Mon 17 Nov 2008, 3:12 pm; edited 1 time in total

ha ek main hoon jis k paas kabhi koi baat nahi hoti

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 17 Nov 2008, 12:02 am

hmm not just kidding koi bat hai magr share nahi kerna chati tum

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Mon 01 Dec 2008, 9:23 pm

hhmm bohut acha laga phar ke .. Great Work,

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Tue 02 Dec 2008, 10:18 am

thks khan

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Tue 17 Feb 2009, 5:13 pm

good poetry

Subject: Re: Anjani Rahein (Kiya Farq Perta Hai) Wed 18 Feb 2009, 11:47 am

thks maria

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